Sunday 1 January 2012

The Bar [Chapter 1]




           Rachel walked in the front door to her new house Sasha bought for them. It was Amazing. the view, the space, she loved it. Rachel wasn't use to the houses these size, she was a city girl, an Apartment with two bathrooms was huge to her.  As Rachel walked to the window to see the view, she was about to touch her arm, but felt the bruises  from her ex and let go.  


          Her past haunts her. the black eyes, the cuts, the fights, the almost dying to many times to count. She couldn't live in Bridgeport anymore, anytime she tried to hide, he found her.  She lost all her friends because of him, besides Sasha.. Sasha was the only one to stand by her side for the past 2 years and didn't blame Rachel for the problems.

        "I see you really love the view" Sasha said well walking out on the deck.  "My favorite part is the feeling of the sun on my skin by the beach."


          Rachel laughed. "you always did love the sun." then Rachel remembered "Didn't you say you knew an amazing bar around her."
            Sasha looked at her "your here for an hour and you already want to go partying.  don't you think we should relax?"
         Rachel laughed "your joking right? even if I wanted to relax, 2 hours later you would end up taking me to the bar!"
          Sasha walked back inside "we can go tonight, but no getting shit faced" Rachel looked out the window and smiles"fine."


    The Bar was about to open, Sasha and Rachel left the house hoping to make it right when it opens.  The bar looked like an old modern warehouse with a lot of lights. Rachel wasn't pleased with the way it looked.

Rachel walked in and before even looking around she already went up to a guy.
Rachel smiled "Hey, want to dance?" Jake looked back pleased, "Sure."


As Rachel went to dance she waved to Sasha. Sasha looked back and thinking, oh great, she gets over things fast.  Sasha turned up the music and joined the party, no way she was missing this song.

After the crowd was getting into the music, the drinks kept going around and the music all started to sound the same.

            After 10 more minutes of dancing, the club turned on the  black lights.  Rachel told Jake she will dance some more in 20, she then Grabbed Sasha and went to the bar seats to order some drinks.

"3 please" Rachel said.
"you got it" the Bartender said.

"me and him are really hitting it off" Rachel told Sasha. Sasha looked back confused "you been dancing for 2 hours now and don't even know his name?"

      Rachel laughed, and took a sip of her drink "when I find out, ill let you know!" Rachel chugged her whole drink down,but Sasha didn't touch hers.  Sasha looked at the Bartender and saw A star tattoo on his face, he didn't look pleased.


Sasha was about to talk to Rachel then a song came on that she loved, Last Friday Night by Katy Perry. they turned it up and the party got crazy. Sasha was in her own world well Rachel was out her mind, dancing on the tables.


Sasha was getting blurry and trying to find Rachel to meet her friends Rob and Mollie.


 Rachel went extremely blurry, she didn't know where she was or where to go. She knew what drunk was like, and this wasn't it, she was worried, she started to call for Sasha.

'Sasha? Sasha," Rachel was saying. The music was to loud. Then a figure came behind her and grabbed her Hand and said "ill take you home" Rachel then passed out.
Sasha was looking around the bar for Rachel,  she was even yelling her name "Rachel! Rachel!"
           Mollie ran up to her. "Oh shit, we need to get you a taxi!" Mollie and Rob helped Sasha to the taxi. Mollie looked at Rob "it was fun, but I got to take her home, you got my number right?" Rob smiled, "yes I do, call me later, hope you two are safe." Sasha passed out in the back seat before saying a word about Rachel.

3 days Later

The Door bell ran, Mollie went to Answer it.


       Rachel was on the Deck. Mollie screamed "Its Rachel! she passed out". Sasha ran out the door, crying. "no, no, no! Rachel!" Sasha tried to wake her up but couldn't, Mollie was on her Knees crying.


                              the screen goes black with Sasha saying "wake up Rachel!"

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